That's a great drawing of your girlfriend, but you should emphasize the nose a bit more.
你的女友这张画像很漂亮,但你应该把她的鼻子再勾画一下。
and at this point, according to my father, I should be looking at farms and cottages in a valley, with the spire of the church of our village showing in the far distance.
照父亲的说法,我面前应是一个山谷,有农场与村舍,还可远远望见老家村子里的教堂的尖顶。